Sunday, December 12, 2010

excerpt from dirty dubdd

PAGE SIX.

PANEL ONE.

The shot will be of Nancy smiling and waving as she walks up to Aaron and Phil.

NANCY: What’s up guys?

PANEL TWO.

The shot will be of Phil and Aaron looking up at Nancy from their chair.

PHIL: Hey Nancy.

AARON: What up?

PANEL THREE.

Nancy is pulling a chair up to the table and sitting down.

NANCY: Ya know… Not shit really. Just grabbin’ some coffee before work.

PHIL (DISEMBODIED): Ah work sucks. Aaron, you don’t have to worry about that though do you?

PAGE SEVEN.

PANEL ONE.

The shot is of Aaron sneering at Phil.

AARON: Maaan, fuck that.

NANCY (DISEMBODIED): What happened?

PANEL TWO.

Phil is pointing at Aaron and leaning towards Nancy, laughing. Aaron is off to the side.

PHIL: Someone didn’t hear their alarm clock this morning.

AARON: Whatever man. I don’t care.

NANCY: So they fired you?

AARON: Yeah. But it’s cool. I could probably get my job back at the movie theater.

PANEL THREE.

Nancy is leaning back in her chair.

NANCY: You could always come work with me.

PHIL (DISEMBODIED): Or go back to school.

PANEL FOUR.

Aaron is grabbing another cigarette. Phil and Nancy are looking at him.

AARON: Maybe I’ll just skip town for a while. You wanna come with me, Nancy?

NANCY: Where do you think you’ll go?

(CONTINUED)

PHIL: Not too far. You gotta have a little flow to be a travelin’ man.

PANEL FIVE.

Aaron is standing up. Phil and Nancy look up at him.

AARON: I don’t know. I’ll hitch-hike, Phil. Let’s see what Benson’s up to.

PAGE EIGHT.

SPLASH PAGE.

Aaron and Phil are walking in the parking lot of the coffee shop. The shot should be from the ground (near the outdoor table and chairs) look out to the lot. Only Aaron and Phil’s legs should be shown.

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